Wednesday, June 30, 2010

We’re Not Desperate: We’re Writers!

by Lori Verni-Fogarsi

When seeking representation, authors investigate the fundamental question: What exactly do agents want? We read blogs and interviews, attend conferences and seminars. We fine-tune our query letters with nearly as much effort as writing the book itself, hoping that once we ally with an agent our book will be on its way to a successful shelf life.

And agents? They provide answers ranging from expert techniques for writing a great hook, to anxiety-reducing details like whether you should address your letter to Ms. Smith, Jane, Jane Smith, or Dear Princess Goddess Please Represent Me Smith.

Regardless, I’ve noticed that it can easily get to the point where agents may seem not only elusive but almost downright villainous, impenetrably hidden behind the iron curtain of their e-mail. Which is why I’d like to share a different perspective, gleaned through research combined with my analytical, always optimistic (albeit sometimes annoying) nature.

Agents are regular people. People who—like writers—have projects to sell, want to be successful in their careers, and have not only a love for books but also a great respect for what it takes to write one.

Sure they want you to keep your letter short, write a compelling hook, and provide an outstanding logline. Why? Because they need to use them to sell your book! And because if they spent all day reading ten-page letters, there would be no time left to do any actual agenting for the limited number of clients they can take on.

Really, we’re in the same boat: Just as writers want agents to represent our books, so do agents want publishers to buy them; Just as we’d love to receive a seven-figure advance, so would agents love to earn that commission. And just as we are frustrated at being involved in some extent of a numbers game, so must agents set aside their frustration at the many wonderful books they have to pass on.

So, when I receive a rejection letter that says, “I appreciate you considering me…” I’ve vowed to believe them. Which reminds me of another point: A literary agent is someone a writer "hires" for representation. And just like if a real estate agent were too busy or didn’t have expertise in my area I’d rather search for the right one, so must we search for the right literary agent.

Besides, Dear Princess Goddess has a tone of desperation. And we are not desperate; we are writers! People who have already accomplished something the vast majority—including agents—are astounded at.

So there’s my perspective (and I’m sticking to it!). Now I’m off to check my e-mail. Again. With fingers crossed that there will be an offer from the right agent who loves my book as much as I do and has a staff of dark-sunglass-wearing bodyguards ready to escort me through New York Times Bestselling stardom.

Hey… I warned you about my optimism; hopefully it’s contagious.

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Lori Verni-Fogarsi is an author, speaker, and small business consultant, currently seeking representation for her contemporary women’s fiction, MOMNESIA. She has also worked as a newspaper columnist and journalist, and has one nonfiction book, House Training Puppies and Adult Dogs. She invites you to visit her blog at http://lorivernifogarsi.blogspot.com and learn more at www.LoriVerniFogarsi.com.



Monday, June 28, 2010

Spare-Time Writing

by Tim Hallinan

I know, you write every day. You sit down in a designated space at a designated time and work on your craft. You're a hero. What more can you do?

Well, you can use your non-writing time to get better. You can pretty much work all the time. That may not sound like good news, but it is. Most of these things are things you probably do anyway. (Note that sentence; I'll come back to it.) And over time, if you play around with these things and make up a bunch of your own, you'll discover that you have a new awareness of your writing. Maybe you'll be a little tougher on yourself, which is always a good sign as long as you don't let the imps take charge – you know, the imps that tell you you're no good, you'll never be any good, your mama's no good, no one you ever knew was any good . . . you know. But a little dissatisfaction is a good thing. You want to try to work on tiptoe.

So here are my suggestions.

Eavesdrop. People don't talk like you write (or like I write, for that matter). They natter, drift, go in circles, create metaphors and similes, make jokes, take for granted each other's frames of references (this last is essential to remember – dialogue is not the best place for exposition, along the lines of, “As you know, Ted, I'm your father.”), get sidetracked, misunderstand each other, drop nonsequiturs at important junctures – you know. Obviously, you don't want all of this in your own dialogue, but for me, good dialogue is like real dialogue, only better. Eavesdrop, take notes if you want to, and when you write dialogue, overwrite to catch those rhythms. Cut later.

Play with what you hear. You've just eavesdropped on three people talking. You made notes. Right there, before you go anywhere else, take about a third of a page of dialogue from that conversation and imagine a story into which it would fit – who these people are, what they're doing, where they came from, where they're going. It's easier than it sounds. Then write a one-page scene in the third person, using the real dialogue. Give the people things to do. If there are hidden relationships – maybe two of them are in love and haven't told the third – write the narrative in a way that hints at the underlying “truth.” Now (here's the good part) go back and write the scene in the first person from the perspective of each of the people in the conversation. These scenes are only a page long, remember? It won't take long, and it's great training for writing fictional scenes.

Rewrite the world. Our environments are lousy with bad writing. When you see it, imagine it better Straighten out convoluted sentences, cut through jargon (“The officer observed the suspect's vehicle proceeding westward at approximately ninety miles per hour and employed his service revolver to . . .”), replace passive verbs wherever you see them, look out for apostrophe pollution (On the drive to the coffee house in which I'm writing this, I saw USED MERCEDES' and HOT WING'S.). You know what I'm saying. If the menu you're looking at sucks, make it better.

Oh, passive verbs? That sentence I asked you to remember in the intro would be better if it read, “You probably already do most of these things already.” Get rid of that passive “are” and that stupid construction.

Sharpen your senses. This is not woo-woo. We're all equipped with five senses, and so are our characters, unless you're writing something I probably don't want to read. Nothing puts the reader in a scene like sensory information – what the character feels, smells, sees, etc. Pick a sense every couple of days and write down every adjective you can find to describe, for example, a smell. Get past sweet, spicy, pungent, sharp, peppery, etc. There are thousands of ways to describe light, scent, touch, sound – you might not use any of the ones you come up with (or you might) but this will limber you up. Move on to taste. Keep going.

Face up. When you're in public, look at faces. Write descriptions of them, right then and there. Be specific – people don't just have a “big” nose, they have a beaked nose that might have a bump in it or might be a little crooked (like Brian Williams on MSNBC) or have asymmetrical nostrils, or, or, or. Write a couple of descriptions of faces only – no hair, no clothes – and ask whoever's with you to pick out the person you're describing. It's amazing how many good writers never give you a clear idea of what their characters look like.

Read actively and widely. Read the kind of book you want to write, obviously, so you can develop an instinct for what the rules and conventions are. That way, you'll be qualified to break them. Reading in your genre can also alert you to the fact that the brainstorm twist in your book – the one that's going to land you the trillion-dollar contract – is already a cliché. And good for you, thinking up a cliché on your own – only good ideas get turned into cliches. When you read, be aware of your reactions and ask why? Why do you like this? Why does that not engage you? Why did that joke work? Why and/or how did the writer do that? Engage the book creatively. Learn to spot the hidden skeleton -- the levers and springs and trapdoors. How was the exposition handled? How were the characters introduced? Why did (or didn't) the ending work? Pay attention to how time is handled. When you're finished, make some notes in a reading notebook about what worked and didn't for you, and why. Oh, and read all sorts of other stuff: science, politics, history, other genres of fiction. The fuller a mind is, the more it can hold. And your characters are going to need to know things.

I do this stuff. Not all the time, but frequently. And it's great practice, and it sharpens specific skills you'll need in writing session after writing session.

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Timothy Hallinan is the author of ten well-received novels, the most recent of which is a series of thrillers set in Bangkok, where he has lived half of each year since 1981. The Bangkok books thus far are A NAIL THROUGH THE HEART, THE FOURTH WATCHER, BREATHING WATER, and -- coming in August 2010 -- THE QUEEN OF PATPONG. His website, www.timothyhallinan.com, contains an extensive site on Finishing the Novel and a blog that's usually devoted to writing and other creative enterprises.

Friday, June 25, 2010

8 Steps to a Stress Free Book Signing

by William C. Mills

Your book has arrived hot off the press. All of your hard work is done; the research, writing, and editing. But there is still more work to do---marketing!

One easy and fun way to market your book is through public book readings and signings. These can be done anywhere: local book clubs, libraries, houses of worship (depending on the topic of your work), local interest groups, and of course the coveted local bookstore!

Below are some of the things that I did for my book, A 30 Day Retreat: A Personal Guide to Spiritual Renewal (Mahwah, NJ: Paulist Press, 2010). When reading, keep in mind your book project and the various things that you can do for marketing. Are you friends with the local librarian? Do you have contacts at local bookstores? Keep a mental inventory to use later. Remember that your work as an author includes both writing and marketing, so push up those sleeves and get cracking!

1. I went online to the Independent Bookstore website. Bookstores are listed by zip code and I searched all the bookstores within a 400 mile radius of my home zip code and contacted each one by email. I created a simple “contact” email message with the basics: a two sentence bio, my book title, my website, and the interest on their part for a book signing. I used the same email message for all the bookstores that I contacted but I made sure to send individual email messages, otherwise, email “blasts” will usually end up in the spam folder. Independent bookstore love, love, love, local authors so be prepared for some positive feedback!

2. I received six positive responses from bookstores. Two wanted to host me for a book signing and the other four offered to stock copies of my book but not have a signing. I always responded to every email message and followed up with a handwritten thank you note and made sure to include my business card too. You never know if a bookstore that said “no thank you” might change their mind later or if they call you at a later time for a different type of author event. You never know, so always be polite and gracious!

3. One of the bookstores that hosted me was Malaprops Bookstore in Asheville, NC a must stop for anyone in the Western Carolina Mountain area. I arrived twenty minutes ahead of time in order to meet the staff and store manager. It was a thrill to see a nice display of my books in their store window as well as a publicity poster on the door!

4. About fifteen people showed up for the reading. I gave a short introduction of my own background, my work as a pastor, writer, and speaker, and then gave a short overview of my book. Rather than read an entire chapter I chose a few sections that an audience might find interesting. Also, I stopped along the reading and provided a few contextual notes as well. I left time for questions and answers.

5. After the reading I invited the people to take a business card and bookmark which I had previously ordered at Vista Print. They have great prices for stationery, postcards, and business cards. Check them out!

6. After the signing the manager brought let me sign 10 books for later sales. These will be labeled as “autographed copies” and will be sold after the reading.

7. Upon leaving for the evening the manager gave me small gift back with some of their house blend coffee, a few newsletters, and a book catalog and coupon for future purchases; a token of their appreciation.

8. The next day I made sure to send a handwritten thank you note and include a business card as well. I also sent an email too as another way to say thank you. I hope to return back some day when I am on the NYTimes Bestseller list!

My next book signing will be in Salisbury, NC in July and I can’t wait. Hopefully it will be well attended, but most important, I want it to be fun for me and for my readers.

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William (Bill) Mills is an ordained priest in the Eastern Orthodox Church, author and retreat leader. His new book, A 30 Day Retreat: A Personal Guide to Spiritual Renewal was recently published by Paulist Press in May. For more information about Bill and his writings visit his website and his blog, Walking With God. Bill is available as a retreat leader for various Christian themes and topics. He is also the author of Our Father: A Prayer for Christian Living.


Bill is a Backspace member.


And here's another author's take on book signings. If you haven't seen this viral video yet, you're in for a treat!








Wednesday, June 23, 2010

The November Agent-Author Seminar (Early Registration Discount)

The November Agent-Author Seminar will be held this year on Thursday, November 11th and Friday, November 12th at the Radisson Martinique in Manhattan, NY. This event always sells out and for good reason - it's two intense days of panels and small-group workshops with over 25 top literary agents attending. Last year 10 writers found their agents through one of our events, and this year we expect those numbers to be even higher!

On Thursday night Kathleen Ortiz from Lowenstein Associates will be teaching an additional 2-hour workshop, "Who’s Listening to You? Effective Online Marketing."

Description: From evaluating web site traffic, discussing effective blogging methods and deciphering the ‘creepy’ term known as branding, this course will cover a variety of online marketing topics so attendees can analyze their current online presence, uncover who their current audience is, who their target audience should be and what they can do to make it more effective (Please note: there is an additional charge for the Thursday night workshop).

Early registration discounts of $100 are available until Sept 15th, bringing the cost down to $495 (Regularly $595). Forum subscribers please visit the Backspace Discussion Forums to find out how you can save as much as $150 from now until the event sells out. To learn more about the discussion forums and the benefits of subscribing, click here.

In the meantime, take a look at what people are saying about last month's 6th Annual Backspace Writers Conference and Agent Author Day:

Our good friend, Little Ms. J writes, Donald Maass Saved My Life



J.P. McNeill gives us a day-by-day breakdown on For The Love of Writing

Lynette Ecklund's Clattering Keys delivers a breakdown of each day, plus what it felt like to read her query letter to two literary agents, and what they had to say!

Visit our conference website for details and check back often over the next two months for frequent updates as we fill in the agenda and announce this year's literary agents.

Prefer a video? Check out What Literary Agents Want, a short excerpt from our the 2009 Backspace Writers Conference.

As always, any questions, or any additional information you need, feel free to email me at chrisg@bksp.org, or pick up the phone and call: 732-267-6449.

See you all in November!

CG

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This year's agents include:

Jenny Bent (The Bent Agency)

Jennifer DiChiara (The Jennifer DeChiara Literary Agency)

Molly Jaffa (Folio Literary Management)

Natanya Wheeler (Nancy Yost Literary Agency)

Lois Winston (Ashley Grayson Literary Agency)

Kathleen Ortiz (Lowenstein Associates)

Michelle Brower (Folio Literary Management)

Rebecca Strauss (McIntosh & Otis, Inc.)

Kirsten Neuhaus (Kirsten Neuhaus Literary)

Alexandra Machinist (Linda Chester Literary Agency)

Jason Allen Ashlock (Movable Type Literary Group)

Joanna Stampfel-Volpe (Nancy Coffey Literary)

Suzie Townsend (FinePrint Literary Management)

Paul Cirone (Molly Friedrich Agency)

Tamar Rydzinski (The Laura Dail Literary Agency)

Diana Fox (Fox Literary Agency)

With more to come!



Monday, June 21, 2010

David Morrell on Book Marketing and Publicity (an interview by J.A. Konrath)

by J.A. Konrath

(Ed note: This post first ran on A Newbie's Guide to Publishing. While a few years old, this interview seems just as relevant today, and maybe even more so.)

CreepersI've been a fan of David Morrell since I was a kid. His new novel, CREEPERS, is his best. That's saying a lot, considering his body of work.

Though David has been in this business for over thirty years, he's continuing to adapt and evolve when it comes to publicity. He graciously answers a few of my newbie questions, offering his thoughts on the future of publishing and marketing.

It's an eye-opener. Get ready to take notes.

JA: I love CREEPERS. I've rarely read anything that moves faster, but you don't sacrifice characterization, backstory, or setting, even though the prose is much sparer than in previous novels. Did you deliberately set out to write this in a different style?

DAVID: I've written books with an alternating A-B A-B structure or a spiral structure or a plot on top of another as in a photographic double exposure. It all depends on the subject matter.

In CREEPERS, I was delighted by the idea of accounting for every instant of the eight hours in which the story takes place as the five investigate the long-abandoned Paragon Hotel. The plot unfolds in what's called real time, so much so that the Brilliance unabridged audio lasts eight hours, the length of time the action would take if it happened in reality. There aren't any summaries of movement , and there aren't any leaps forward as in "Five minutes later, he reached the second floor." Every moment is on the page.

This approach (I can't recall another novel that uses it) required a kind of documentary style. Each sentence is deliberately straight-forward, and they all proceed in a linear one-step-after-another fashion. They're like the clang, clang, clang of flapping sheet metal that is heard throughout the novel, building momentum.

JA: You've been in this business since the Gospels were written... how do you feel about your new campaign and the new approach to publicity? How much has it changed since you started in this business (if you can remember back that far)?

DAVID: Two big changes happened in the 1990s. First, the warehouse system (in which paperbacks were distributed) collapsed. Second, mega-corporations began buying publishing companies with the result that perhaps as many as 25 publishers were reduced to what eventually became called "the six sisters." Six huge umbrella corporations within which the former independent publishers now exist as imprints. Then the six became five. Obviously this limits the opportunities an author has to sell a book.

In the present decade, a further major change occurred. These huge publishing companies began to structure themselves as if they were selling cornflakes. Formerly, the editorial board had the power. When a book was accepted for publication, an editor would ask the marketing and publicity department how to promote it. But now, in stark contrast, manuscripts go to the marketing department first. If an author doesn't have a strong sales history or if a beginning author doesn't have a dynamite subject or what's called a platform (are you young, good-looking, an investigative journalist, and preferably female)--in short, can they get you on the morning talk shows and on Oprah--you don't have much of a chance.

I mention that it's an advantage to be female because the morning TV shows consciously make their interview selections based on the knowledge that, except for the first half-hour, the majority of their audience is female. To be specific, the average TODAY SHOW viewer is a 54 year old woman with a $45,000 a year income and teenagers living at home. Books have now become about demographics, and the marketing department makes its recommendations on that basis.

Further, the marketers go to Borders or Barnes & Noble and ask the executives how many copies of a particular book those chains would buy if the publisher were to bring out the book. If the number isn't high, the book might not get published. There are a few exceptions in which an editor falls in love with a book and says to hell with the marketers. But that's a rarity.

Obviously, this is not good news for most authors. We are in a position in which we must change or fail. In another answer, I'll talk about one way that I changed my approach. But for now, I want to point out that one of the few good results of what I just described is that smaller publishers once considered marginal (like Poisoned Pen Press or Uglytown Press) are now assuming importance. They don't pay big advances, but they publish books that deserve to be read. They are a way to stay in print and to build a new sales history.

JA: What is it about CREEPERS that makes it stand out from the 50,000 other novels published every year?

DAVID: Although I've had numerous bestsellers, I don't take anything for granted. With CREEPERS, I decided to try something new and pretend that my name wasn't on the manuscript. I wasn't going to count on my previous bestsellers, etc. I wanted the book to have a background that readers would find interesting, a topic that they would be curious about, with just a few words of explanation. This might sound obvious, but actually, it's something that is often ignored. I'm not talking about high concept, which I loath. Rather, I'm talking about the heart of the book. What is its central subject? Why should people care?

A couple of years ago, I read a newspaper article about an underground movement known as urban explorers. These are history and architecture enthusiasts who infiltrate buildings that have been sealed and abandoned for decades. They want to immerse themselves in the past. One of their nicknames (which they dislike) is creepers. I jumped on this. Who doesn't want to explore old abandoned buildings? Who would have known it was a subculture or that it was popular around the world or that hundreds of thousands of contacts are on Google and Yahoo?

When I was a literature professor at the University of Iowa, I taught a course in literary archetypes based on the theories of Freud, Jung, and Joseph Campbell. The idea is that certain situations are inherently interesting because something about them is hardwired into our brain. I recognized urban exploration as one of those archetypes. The subject grabbed me and compelled me to write the novel.

JA: Are you planning on exploring the world of urban exploration again in a future work?

DAVID: I tend not to repeat myself. Partly, this is because it usually takes me a year (at least) to write a novel, and I don't want to spend it boring myself by doing the same thing repeatedly. Also, I think authors need to be careful about going back to the same well again and again.

JA: I've heard you describe working with your publisher, CDS, as a partnership rather than the standard employer/employee relationship. Why? Is this the direction publishing is heading?

Unless an author is the latest new flavor, the odds of getting a good publicity effort from a publisher are slim. I became so frustrated with the half-hearted marketing efforts I was getting that I decided to take charge.

First, I changed paradigms and went to the largest book distributor in the United States, CDS Books. Their main business is getting books into stores. But they also have a small publishing division, about a dozen books a year. Because they don't publish many books, they pay attention to each of them. They told me that their policy was to treat authors as partners (what a new concept). They asked me how I wanted to proceed. I answered, "My daughter, Sarie, who used to be a publicist for Random House will handle all the publicity." CDS readily agreed.

Sarie and I then went to Nanci Kalanta, who runs Horror World on the internet. Nanci is a brilliant internet marketer, who agreed to use all her skills to help us. I can't emphasize enough how important internet publicity is. In Nanci's case, the horror connection is important because CREEPERS is a mixed genre novel: thriller and horror. I think that's one reason the book creates tension. There's nothing supernatural in CREEPERS, but the tone suggests that there is. Readers don't have the anchor of any one genre's conventions, so they're not able to anticipate where the story will go.

In any case, we experimented with every marketing idea we'd ever thought of. It was great fun. For example, Nanci asked novelist Brian Knight to design a CREEPERS maze game for her website http://www.horrorworld.org/. The viewer goes down hotel corridors and makes choices that lead to disaster or else to the chance to win prizes, such as a signed CREEPERS advanced reader's copy, a signed Brilliance CREEPERS audio, or an MP-3 player (also from Brilliance).

As another example, my daughter thought it would be a great idea to have a CREEPERS survival kit for give-aways. I did the research and, through http://www.beelogo.com,/ was able to acquire affordable CREEPERS key-chain flashlights attached to CREEPERS first-aid kits that included band-aids, antiseptic wipes, and cough drops. These were immensely helpful in attracting attention and good will, especially with book stores.

Then CDS Books decided to do a one-minute animated presentation of the book (what's called a vidlit) that you can see at www.madlabcreative.com/creepers.html. Make sure you turn on your computer's sound.

But not every publisher is as cooperative as CDS. We can't take anything for granted. All authors must become more involved in publicity.

Recently I had a conversation with a very best-selling writer whose sales are starting to slip. He asked me what he could do to turn things around. I told him the marketing experiments I was having fun with. His answer was, "I'm a writer. I don't want to be involved in that stuff." It's my belief that he'll regret his refusal.

Last October, I co-founded (with Gayle Lynds) the International Thriller Writers organization (http://www.internationalthrillerwriters.com/) which is helping thriller writers understand new ways to promote themselves.

To get an overview of the recent big changes in publishing, go to the Backspace website (http://www.bksp.org/) and read Richard Curtis's three essays. Richard has some very interesting things to say about how the internet can be useful to authors. To get an idea about some of the things that authors can do to promote themselves, look at Barry Eisler's essays on MJ Rose's website http://www.mjrose.com/. Look under BUZZ, BALLS & HYPE.

The publishing world has changed drastically. We need to do everything we can to let readers know about our work, even if that effort takes away from our writing time.

JA: Thanks so much, David. And to everyone reading this--CREEPERS isn't just Morrell's best book, it's one of the best thrillers I've ever read. The pub date is September 6, but copies are already showing up in stores.

Buy a copy. It will blow you away.

*****


Joseph Andrew Konrath was born in Skokie, IL in 1970. He graduated from Columbia College in Chicago in 1992. His first novel, Whiskey Sour (2004), introduced Lt. Jacqueline "Jack" Daniels. Others in the series
j.a.konrath
include Bloody Mary (2005), Rusty Nail (2006), Dirty Martini (2007), Fuzzy Navel (2008), and Cherry Bomb (2009). The books combine hair-raising scares and suspense with laugh out loud comedy.

Joe is also the editor of the hitman anthology These Guns For Hire (2006). His short stories have appeared in more than sixty magazines and collections, and his work has been translated into ten languages.

Under the name Jack Kilborn, Joe wrote the horror novel Afraid (2009).

Joe's been nominated for several awards, including the Anthony, Macavity, Gumshoe, Dagger, and Barry, and has won the Derringer, Bob Kellog, EQMM Reader's Choice, and two Lovie awards.

His blog, A Newbie's Guide to Publishing (jakonrath.blogspot.com), has had over 400,000 hits since 2005.
Joe is married, has three children and three dogs, and currently lives in a suburb of Chicago. He occasionally teaches writing and marketing at the College of Dupage.

You can reach Joe at joekonrath@comcast.net.

Friday, June 18, 2010

The Opening or Making the Average Joe Unaverage


In my last blog, I wrote about the valuable experience of attending a writer's conference. My experience with Backspace was exceptional, and even as a published author, I learned and re-learned so many writing principles. One of the highlights of the conference was a mini-workshop by the master teacher of fiction writing, Donald Maass.

The Fire in Fiction: Passion, Purpose and Techniques to Make Your Novel GreatMaass talked about the opening of a novel, how it must be exceptionally crafted, maximizing the writer's skills. He started out by asking how many of us were writing about "average people caught in extraordinary circumstances." Quite a few hands went up, including my own. He explained that was one of the three types of protagonists. (The other two types are the heroic character and the dark character. I'll talk about Maass' insights for those characters in the following posts.)

Maass started the lecture by asking us to think of one person in our lives we admired. We were asked to write the name down in our notes. (One thing Maass insists upon: if you're going to learn the techniques of being an excellent writer, you have to write. No thinking of the answer and "keeping it in your head"!)
 
After all the pens and pencils had stopped scratching, Maass asked us to choose one characteristic of that person that we admired. The person I chose for the exercise was my mother, a vital, interested, and vibrant woman who continues to live each day to the fullest. And the characteristic I most admire about her is her compassion.

Next, Maass asked us to write down two incidents or actions that illustrate this characteristic. I thought about my mother's compassion, her special empathy for children, and I realized (My gasp of insight was audible!) that my male protagonist had the same strength. I jotted down two of the thousands of times I'd seen my mother display her empathy. (An added benefit to the workshop: wonderful memories of my mother bubbled to the surface!)

Then, Maass asked us to show our chosen characteristic for our main character within the first five pages of our manuscript. Maass explained that the connection between reader and main character is the most important connection of your work. A reader won't survive "four minutes, let alone four hundred pages with a miserable excuse for a human being or even a plain old average Joe."

Even though I've written my current beginning countless times, I went back and did it again.
Maass' ideas are from his book Fire in Fiction. I felt so privileged to be able to advance my craft through an in-person workshop by a master of fiction. 

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Rebbie Macintyre was born in America's heartland and now lives in Florida. She graduated from the University of Missouri and earned her master's degree at the University of South Florida. Her life experiences have provided the fodder for a number of her stories. She's been a teacher, counselor, salesperson, violinist, swimming coach, SCUBA diver and sludge truck operator. She enjoys hiking, biking, a glass of wine and mountain sunsets. She is a member of Mystery Writers of America and Sisters in Crime.

Her first novel, Cast the First Stone, was released in March, 2009.

Her second book, A Corner of Universe, will be released in February, 2010.

This post originally appeared on One Letter At a Time

Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Rejecting Rejection

by Carmen Ferreiro Esteban

Let’s start with the obvious: Editors and agents are people. They come in all shapes and sizes and have different tastes. Their likes and dislikes are their own. Their rejection of your manuscript does not reflect on your writing, but in their inability to fall in love with it.

Agents and editors are flooded with submissions. They have the prerogative of being selective. They will only represent the stories they love. 

And that is their right.

Yours is to keep looking for the agent/editor that will fall in love with yours.
So keep that rejection letter in perspective. Don’t throw the manuscript away, but send it again. Because what one editor/agent hates, another will love. You just have to find the right one.

You don’t believe me?

Let’s do an exercise.

Here are two versions of a description of a lake up in the mountains of Spain, a setting in a young adult novel I’m working on.

One of the versions is mine (not necessarily number one). The other is a rewrite from a person in my critique group.

Once you have read them, please, leave a comment saying which one you like best.

There is no right or wrong answer. If you choose the one I wrote, I’ll be pleased. If you choose the other, you’ll prove my point: not everyone has the same taste. And its corollary: not everyone will love your writing.
And that is okay. Who would want to go to a party where every one is wearing the same dress?

Version #1

The water was black like the boy had said. Black and still, like a piece of night fallen to earth. A perfect circle from where I stood at the edge of the ridge: a full black moon trapped in the mountains.

Version #2

Black and still, like a piece of night fallen to earth, the lake formed a perfect circle from where I stood at the edge of the ridge: a full black moon trapped in the mountains.

*****

Carmen Ferreiro Esteban was born in Galicia (Northern Spain) and went to college in Madrid, where she finished her Ph.D. in Biology.  For the next ten years, Carmen worked as a researcher both in Madrid and at the University of Davis in northern California.[Image]

Carmen’s writing career started when she came to live in Pennsylvania in the 1990s. Following her first sale, a magazine article on latex allergy, Carmen published four books for Chelsea House (Facts on File): Heroin, Ritalin, Mad Cow Disease, and Lung Cancer.

As a fiction writer, Carmen has published short stories in the literary magazine Errata, winning second prize in the 2004 Bucks County Writers Workshop Summer Contest.

Her Young Adult novel Two Moon Princess, was published in October 2007 by Tanglewood Press. It was recognized with the bronze award in the Book of the Year Contest by the ForeWord Magazine in the Juvenile fiction category. Tanglewood Press has agreed to publish its sequel, The King in the Stone.

You can read more about Carmen on her blog EspressoLatteMocha

Monday, June 14, 2010

BP - Perfect Day

Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Let Us Now Praise Literary Agents, Editors, and Conferences


Last Friday I was scheduled to speak at the ever-terrific Backspace Writer’s Conference. After arriving Thursday afternoon, I had a pleasure I wish on every writer: hearing agents judge query letters and the first pages of books without, yes, for the first time, without clenching and unclenching my fists as I waited for my own turn.

The Murderer's DaughtersWithout my usual dry throat, shaking legs, and nausea, I was able to truly concentrate on the wisdom offered. (Previously, the humming in my head—pleaseloveme, pleaseloveme, pleaseloveme—was too loud to fully take it all in. Praise, I discounted, and critique I’d carry around like a broken doll.)

As I listened to Jeff Kleinman, Kristin Nelson and Joanna Stampfel-Volpe, the wisdom and generosity of these literary agents more than impressed me. Despite their occasionally critically-harsh moments, their desire to see writers succeed was palpable. This is why writers should go to conferences such as Backspace and The Muse and The Marketplace, not necessarily to find an agent (though that is great and possible) but to learn from them.

I’ve heard editors and agents almost beg writers to pay attention. At Grub Street I participated on a promotion panel with editor Christine Pride from Random House and her sincerity in wanting writers to do well infused the air. Hearing Jeff, Kristin, and Joanne implore writers to do better may have engendered resentment in some workshop participants, however for those who listened with a willingness to learn, gold and diamonds were being offered.

These agents and editors know their stuff and they share it. If you’re serious about being published by a mainstream publisher, don’t scoff and rant about ‘the marketplace,’ or brush off their advice by feeding yourself a story about changes in publishing, or grumble about the crap being published today. If you want to put out a quality piece of work that readers will appreciate, what they say is true:

- Start your book where it is interesting. You do not need to force-feed backstory so your reader will ‘understand.’ Readers are smart (Otherwise they probably wouldn’t read, capish?).

- Don’t cram your query with characters and plot. Keep it simple, otherwise A.E.G.O. (agent’s eyes glaze over).

- Don’t be cutesy in your query. Ever.

- Don’t tell agents or editors that your book is interesting, amazing, funny, exactly like (insert bestseller title,) chilling or bittersweet—use the muscular description that will show them.

- Take out dialog tags, unneeded description, and words that show how smart you are and how well you use the thesaurus. Give the reader a strong clean story that contains the ‘gotta-know’ that forces the reader must turn the page.

You see, agents want you to do well. Editors want to find terrific books. There is not a conspiracy to foist garbage on the public, keep your work unpublished, or push only best-selling authors on the world.

Yes, we have to work hard. And then even harder. We must polish our manuscripts until our fingers ache. There is more competition than there has ever been for the reader’s attention. And when it’s all done, then we have to promote the heck out of it. However, the amazing thing is that there are places like Backspace and Grub Street who exist to help. And there are editors and agents who truly are in love with the written word working overtime to make our books happen.

I know this. I am lucky enough to have one of each: Thank you, Hilary Teeman and St. Martin’s Press; Merci, Stéphanie Abou and Foundry Literary and Media. The twisty road to both of you and to the Backspace Conference was worth the bumpy ride.

*****


The dark drama of Randy Susan Meyers' debut novel, The Murderer's Daughters is informed by her years of work with batterers, domestic violence victims, and at-risk youth impacted by family violence.

Randy Susan Meyers’ short stories have been published in the Fog City Review, Perigee: Publication for the Arts, and the Grub Street Free Press.


In Brooklyn, where Randy was born and raised, her local library was close enough to visit daily and she walked there from the time she figured out the route. In many ways, she was raised by books, each adding to her sense of who she could be in this world. Some marked her for horror. Reading In Cold Blood at too tender an age assured that she’d never stay alone in a country house. Others, like Heidi by Johanna Spyri, made her worship her grandfather even more. Some taught her faith in the future.

                                                                   
A Tree Grows In Brooklyn by Betty Smith was the only bible Randy ever owned, her personal talisman of hopefulness. Each time she read it, she was struck anew by how this author knew so much and dared to write it.


Randy now lives in Boston with her husband and is the mother of two grown daughters. She teaches writing seminars at the Grub Street Writers’ Center in Boston.

Monday, June 7, 2010

Signing in the Waldenbooks by Parnell Hall

Friday, June 4, 2010

How to Make the Waiting More Bearable

(Or, Things To Do In Between Clicking on “Check Mail”)


by Donna Cummings
Writing is a waiting game, no matter what stage of the game you're participating in. I am currently in the "query-go-round" stage, which is akin to hoping you'll be drafted in the first round.
Once you've finally acquired an agent, you move on to the next stage, which is procuring a lucrative book deal. Now you are actually IN the game.
After the editor makes your book even more perfect than it was, it goes into production (we'll call this the "playoff" round). Still you wait, because there is nothing instantaneous about book publishing, and it will be months before you can visit your book on the shelves of the local Barnes & Noble.
Each stage of the game involves waiting. Waiting is excruciating. Nobody ever says "Hallelujah! I get to WAIT!"
I hope to one day give you advice on waiting through the later stages of the publishing process. At this point, all I can talk about with any knowledge is the initial stage.
You can spend the waiting time by clicking on "Check Mail" so much that your email provider actually re-designs the program and ELIMINATES that feature (I'm sure it's coincidence that Hotmail did that, but I managed to foil their evil plan and find a workaround).
No matter what, waiting will never be completely bearable, so here are some things I've come up with to distract you from the waiting game. The best part is they even qualify as a productive use of your time, so you don't have to feel guilty for not writing (because they're writing-related).
1. Write the dedication and the acknowledgment pages for your book. These can actually change, day to day, based on who has irritated you ("you are SO out of my book after that snarky comment") or inspired you ("I'm moving them up to the THIRD paragraph of the dedication since they let me turn left in front of all that traffic").

2. Figure out the casting for the movie version. Even if you don't get casting approval, at some point you will be asked "so who did you envision playing so-and-so?"  If you've already thought this through, you won't have to fumble around for an answer while on live TV. Plus it's really fun to fantasize about plan those intimate meetings to discuss "character motivation" with the hunky actor playing the part.

3. Write your Oscar acceptance speech. This is a synopsis of the people who deserve to be thanked (you don't want to be chided for leaving out Someone Important), and a chance to say "this wouldn't be possible if I hadn't written a really kick-ass book".

4. Plan your outfits for your personal appearances. You know this isn't something to be left to the last minute. Nobody needs a wardrobe malfunction to upstage what a great book you've unleashed on the world.

5. Write cover blurbs for your friends' books. This will give you practice writing succinct, pithy bon mots, and it will also generate good karma for when you need reciprocity for your books. If you don't have friends who write, practice writing succinct, pithy mal mots for those books that made you wonder how the author got published before you did. Just make sure you sprinkle some "bad karma repellant" around first.

6. Prepare for your Oprah interview. You know you won't jump up and down on her couch, but you might get a little sniffly describing the long waiting game that is known as publishing. So rehearse what you'll say, and practice being modest. 

7. Write some questions for book clubs. Of course people will select your book for their monthly meeting. This is the book they've been waiting for, the one that makes slogging through all those other gatherings worthwhile. Plus you can steer them towards those passages that you really love, and that deserve a little extra love and attention.

8. Outline your "How to Get Published" book. You've learned a lot about writing, and waiting. Once you're a best-selling author, you may not have time to write this book, so do it now, while it's fresh in your mind.

I'm sure you can come up with other great ideas for staying sane while waiting. Feel free to share them!

*****


Donna Cummings has explored several careers, including attorney, winery tasting room manager, and now, writer.  She writes humorous contemporary and historical romances, and is represented by Christine Witthohn of Book Cents Literary Agency.   While she's waiting to advance to the next round of the playoffs, she can be found at www.AllAboutTheWriting.com.

Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Getting Your Sneakers Dirty

By Lara Ehrlich

My young adult novel, THE HERO, is set in Stone, a fictional coastal town based on my hometown of Stonington, Connecticut. The protagonist, Junior, joins a mysterious sport known only as "the Game," which practices in the marsh behind the old church. Anyone who went to Stonington High School would recognize this marsh.

 
Stonington High School—the ugliest building on the East Coast—was built on a marsh. Now, you probably hated high school too, even if your school was constructed on dry land. And like me, you probably considered gym class the epitome of everything that is wrong with high school. But your gym class had nothing on mine.

 
Setting aside all the normal gym class woes (changing in the locker room, flailing on the basketball court, jazzersizing to Richard Simmons videos...), gym class at SHS was singularly awful because we had to exercise in the swamp.

 
The track flooded in the spring and froze in the winter. We ran the mile in soaked sneakers. The field was always muddy, and swarms of mosquitoes hunted you with more ferocity than a horde of bloodthirsty jocks.
I hated gym.

 
Now back to writing. Despite my familiarity with the wetlands of Stonington High School, I couldn't tell you the first thing about the types of birds that nested in our field hockey nets or the plant life that thrived along the boundary of the sodden track.
 

Setting is in the details. And I didn't have any details.
 
Google searches for "salt marsh flora" and "Stonington marsh grass" yielded unhelpful articles like "Salt marsh geomorphology: Physical and geological effects on landform" and "Composition and seasonality of micro-algal mats on a salt marsh in New Brunswick, Canada."
 

Just as I was about to give up and change the setting of THE HERO to a desert, I remembered Anne Lamott's advice in Bird by Bird: "There are an enormous number of people out there with invaluable information to share with you, and all you have to do is pick up the phone. They love it when you do, just as you love it when people ask if they can pick your brain about something you happen to know a great deal about."
 

Hm. Surely there were people in Stonington, Connecticut, who actually LIKED the marsh. And surely these strange people would jump at the chance to share their wealth of knowledge with an aspiring novelist.
 

Who might these people be? My first thought was the Denison Pequotsepos Nature Center, where at the age of ten I attended a nature summer camp. The first afternoon of "bug collecting" confirmed that ecology is not for me. But the nature center staff sure seemed to enjoy themselves. And so:
 

Good morning,
 

I grew up down the street from the Denison Pequotsepos Nature Center and have fond memories of participating in the summer camp when I was little. For that reason, I thought of your nature center first when looking for the answer to what might be a strange question.
 

I'm writing a novel that is set in a marsh. The marsh is based on the marshes around Stonington, and I'm having trouble finding information about the specific birds, plants, and fish one would find in the marsh. I now live in Chicago, or I would come visit the DPNC in person.
 

Could you point me to a great resource for this information? Or might you be able to answer the following questions:
 

* Is there a small fish that swims in schools in a salt water marsh?
 

* Is there a bird that might fly down (without too much fear of people) to scavenge dead fish?
 

* What is the tallest grass/bush/weeds you might find in a salt water marsh?
 

Thank you in advance for any suggestions you might offer!
 

All the best,
 

Lara Ehrlich
 

Within the hour, I received this enthusiastic—and thorough!—response:
 

Hi Lara,
 

Fortunately your questions are easy to answer. One small fish often found swimming around in shallow tidal areas are Silversides (Atlantic silversides – see Wikipedia). Others could be mummichogs, blueback herring (gets larger) or many kinds of juvenile flounder, striper or bluefish.
 

The bird I think first as being the first arrival on anything to eat along the shore is the Herring Gull which is a large gull in the New England area only exceeded by the Great Black Backed Gull in size. The Herring Gull is fearless and will follow charter fishing boats back to the dock, flying within feet of the vessel. I am sure the writers of “Finding Nemo” were thinking of these guys when all the gulls were on the dock, watching Nemo and calling “Mine, mine, mine”. They are the sound of the shoreline of any fishy place (or French fries).
 

As for tall members of the coastal grass community, there are none mightier than the mighty Phragmites. (They rhyme). The phrags are considered a pest in many areas and although it is called the Common Reed, the local variety may be local to some other part of the world because of how they have overgrown the back edges of so many marshes. They do not like full salt water but they thrive in the area between the real salt marsh and the coastal red oak and red cedar.
 

The next major grass community seaward would be the Salt-meadow cordgrass. It can stand full salt water occasionally. This is the one that the colonists harvest for cattle fodder. It is great mulch for gardens if you can get it. It has no weed seeds.
 

Good luck with your writing.
 

Bob
 
Anne Lamott was right: there's always an expert you can call for invaluable information, such which birds scavenge dead fish. Thanks to Bob, my marsh has come alive with phragmites and silversides. And I didn't even have to get my sneakers dirty.


*****

Lara Ehrlich is currently finishing revisions to her first novel, THE HERO, which she expects to begin querying in June 2010. When she’s not writing, she works as the Publications Coordinator at Goodman Theatre in Chicago. Lara is a graduate of Boston University and the University of Chicago.

Visit Lara online at
www.LaraEhrlich.com.





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